Tuesday 26 February 2013

treatment

Writer : Charlie Walters 
Contact information : cwaltersse8@gmail.com  - email, @cwaltersmfc - twitter, 21817461 - BBM, 07875885112 - mobile number. 

Two young boys lose their phone and use a telephone box, which turns out to be a transporter. they use it to go all over Bromley. 

Connor F: Is best best friends with Craig D and are out in Bromley high street as start of the film. he then goes on the adventure with Craig all over bromley, until they end up in a classroom. here a fight break outs on whether they should steel a mac and conner leaves Craig in the classroom  and leaves. 

Craig D: Is best best friends with Connor F and are out in Bromley high street as start of the film. he then goes on the adventure with Connor all over bromley, until they end up in a classroom. Here a fight break outs on whether they should steel a mac and after craig losses the fight conner leaves him and is left stranded in the classroom with no way home. or is he?

Alex S: alex is driving a car, when Connor and Craig turn up in the back of his car and is very surprised by this, they then leave. 

Emily A: Emily is in her room when Connor and Craig come out of her wardrobe and surprise her, they quickly leave. 

who? Connor and Craig 
what?  A teleporting telephone box.  
when? whenever 
where? Bromley 
why? Shopping in Bromley 

Act 1 - The scene starts with conner and Craig walking down Bromley high street, when Connor realizes that he has lost his phone, out of panic he wants to call home letting his mum know. They enter the phone box and try to make the call, although it does not work, so they leave. They leave and find they have moved and are in the Bromley library, they hole library shouts at them to be quite. They are very confused about what has happened and quickly leave through the cupboard that they came in. 

Act 2 - A montage starts of all the places that Conner and Craig have been to, with the first being a toilet block. There is some music in the background to go with this along with some diegetic sound. The second place they go to is a girls bedroom, the girl's is name Emily. She is in her towel and very shocked to see the two boys come out of her wardrobe. Craig and Conner are happy to see a girl in just her towel, while Emily is not happy and confused. The pair do a high five and leave through the wardrobe, and are happy that the box is giving them some benefits. 

The next part of the montage in them in a gym, with people lifting 80-kg, they feel very intimidated. As Conner and Craig do not have big muscles and do not want to make any of the workers unhappy they quickly leave through where they came from. They next arrive in a work office full of very shocked 9-5 workers, papers are thrown all over the room, as the pair have just came out of a small cupboard. The pair are happy that they are shocking people, and still seeking benefits. They once again leave through the way they came in, looking forward to the next place they are going. Next in the montage they appear in the back of a man car, the man is called Alex S. He is very confused and scared that two people are in the back of his car, Conner and Craig complement Alex on his car and leave laughing. They next enter Mc Donald's full of shocked hungry people all confused and scared. Conner and Craig do not like fast food so leave quickly through the door they came in. After they are in the porch of some once house, which does not excite the pair so leave quickly. 

After they are in a changing room full of heavy rugby players, which are all very confused, angry and some even scared. The pair feel intimidated by the rugby players and leave through the door they came in. As they leave shirts, boots and shorts are all thrown at the closing door, showing that the players are not happy. The final place of the montage is them at a classroom, where there is a mac and no teacher in the classroom. Craig feels they should use the opportunity to take the mac for free, while Conner knows it is wrong and they should just leave it. 

Act 3 -   They have a small argument which escalates into a small fight about whether they should take the mac or not. The fight ends with Conner locking Craig into a small room, then leaving in the cupboard that they came in. He then feels bad that he locked his best friend, so returns to let him out. But when he returns the door is open and the mac gone........... 

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